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    Author: soul_driven
    ASL Info:    22/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 23/26/14
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 212
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 466



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       I miss her


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    "I know that"
    know that you don't feel for me
    The way I feel for you.
    We're good friends, I value that,
    There's nothing you need do.
    But as a friend I need to tell you
    What is in my heart.
    An unsaid truth is like a wall,
    Keeping us apart.
    My love for you will go nowhere,
    Will just remain with me.
    I'll hold it in my quiet arms
    And feel it constantly.




    Submitted on 2005-08-14 12:59:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      if this doesn't apply to your life [during anytime] u coulda fooled me it was good at capturing the feeling. maybe a little to wordy but enjoyable all the same
    | Posted on 2005-08-14 00:00:00 | by I want dark | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it alot, it reminds me of a sitution i was in once upon a time. I loved how you phrased it, but to me some of the words weren't neccesary. Keep writing
    | Posted on 2005-08-14 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this a lot. I haven't been able to relate to anything this much all night. I don't think it was too wordy at all. I love it as it is. I'm really sorry you have to go through that though. I know what it's like to be completely in love with a good friend who doesn't love you like that in return. I still miss him too. We only went out for a short time, but he used me for a few months after we broke up. That's ok though, it's not like I didn't know that he was just using me. Some things are hard to say no to, you know? But anyways, we're still close I guess. I hope everything gets better for you. I mean, you'll probably never completely get over it, but it'll be easier to deal with. That's just how it is for me. I don't know. I wish you nothing but the best. You described the feelings perfectly. Great job

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-08-14 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]



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