wow, that's deep. Very interesting. and the end part is beautiful. How people judge people and how no one pays attention to the starving And the addiction that is life is only resolved by the rehab we call death.
Ahhhh... NO! REFUSE IT! Don't convey to society and its wallowing, abusive means of perfection. WHEN will people learn beauty doesnt only exsist on the cover of a magazine! OY. This piece is moving and disturbing and slightly morbid. Eating disorders are horrible. I wish this piece had a description, it seems impersonal without one. But if it's meant that way, more power to yea. Peace -rue
food is far too yummy to be thrown up... (unless you took a visit to the boo boo palace<taco bell> which, although delicous, oh so delicious, can cause havoc in your intestines and colon... lol) did you know that the majority of men that I know like women that arent... well... bones. curves are sexy. i have curves. it is part of being a woman. love it. enjoy it.
I would call this orange satire if I could, but I can't so I won't. This is morbidly gorgeous and dark. I absolutely love it. Prosaic lives, nice.
You know that feeling when you're comenting on someones work and you don't want to give them a certain compliment because you think it might affect how they write in a negative way? Well this was good, but I don't want to affect your writing in a negative way (it's a good thing).