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The Angel of Death


Author: Saaber
ASL Info:    20/m/BD
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 101 /99 /26
Words: 82
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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The Angel of Death



Death lingers
Wherever his shadow falls,
There is no escape from him
When you are trapped in his notorious walls.

There is at least one death,
Each time he is around,
Some believe, some do not
Because he is never found.

No one ever
Has escaped his clutches,
For he has the power
To reduce people to ashes.

He is the Angel of Death,
The one appointed for taking lives,
His name is Azrael,
True character, not lies.




Submitted on 2005-08-15 03:24:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  death is waiting at every corner every step. so be prepared.

Satan inquires of me: What do you eat? What is your dress? And where do you reside? I answer him: My food is death, my dress is the shroud and my residence is the grave. _Hatim Asim


cool write yo.
| Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very good Saaber, It was outstanding. Though I think it could use some lenthening, but oh well! Keep it up Kido,


Jessica O.o)
| Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by jslbabygirl101 | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this...there was a lot of imagry and it was errie and a bit haunting. This one was also good in the sense that it was extremely thought envoking and yet so vauge as to leave room for the reader to wonder...now becuz I'm wierd I'm left wondering what exactly inspired you to write this one because I think you put more feeling into it than first glance would suspect...in any case this was an amazing write.
peace'
~jess
| Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  u've got a lot of gud comments but seriously dude this genre iz not for you. although this is one of ur best poems. gu rhymin.
| Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
  It has a good story line. good description. It was alittle short, but i think its pretty good anyways.I could see the angel of death while reading it.

Silent_Tears
| Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by Silent_Tears | [ Reply to This ]
  this was good a old title with new words thanx for your comment on untitled 1 out of 7 comments you are the only one in the dark to bad maybe i should have started something a little simpler for you i never puncuate any of my poetry even in novels so far so good it works fo me
great poem you have here
thanx again
sandman
| Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting...the whole eerie image this poetry gives is great, makes it mysterious, outlandish...it also make the reader wonder about death and what happens after death, this poem pushes the reader to question and explore new aspects, which is a wonderful thing to achieve, this is excellent, keep writing
- Illusion
| Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Illusion | [ Reply to This ]
  this was a great story one you could really imagine as you read seeing i hope you will add to this stoy maybe the journey to meet this saint you found
great write
sandman
| Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  This was was a great story. The images jumps at me and the words flowed throughout it. I hope you write more to it or maybe a second part.
| Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
  awesome i loved it it rocked really keep up the good work really nice hope to read more of your poems ok.

Love, Serenity Blade
| Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
  It was pretty good, but too short. I liked it, its just that you could've put a little more of a description. But over all I enjoyed it.
| Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Naymless | [ Reply to This ]


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