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    dots Submission Name: I'll still love youdots
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    Author: pj5
    ASL Info:    37/f/IOWA
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 40/41/10
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 722



    Description:
       I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS 11. MY FIRST LOVE MOVED AWAY. HOPE YOU ENJOY, SMILES.


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    I'll still love you,
    after all we've been through.
    I want it the way it used to be,
    just you and me.....
    Even though we are far apart,
    you will always be in my heart.
    The tears I have cried were no lie,
    my heart was broken over a short goodbye.
    Your tender kiss and gentle touch,
    make me miss you oh so very much.
    I must be going now to hide away,
    hoping and praying I will see you again someday.
    If it should happen that I don't return,
    I want you to know it's for you I yearn.
    Don't forget,
    because I'll never regret.
    That I'll still love you......




    Submitted on 2005-08-15 09:02:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is another sad poem...very sweet in it's own right. I swear I'm gonna start crying soon! All the heartache of losing my first love came back full force, only I had to see him everyday. That first love that we'll never forget. Memories get old, but they never do disappear. Thank you for sharing this! Even at 11 you did a great job!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      For you to write that when you were 11 is amazing.. Its not like corny or anything. Lol. But I know what your talking about, except I was the one who moved away... Like dreamweaver said memories get old but they never disappear...

    Keep it up

    ~Much love from me to you~
    | Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
      awesome for an 11 year old! nice description...but even better emotion. we all know what its like to lose that first love...its a heartwrenching feeling, like youll never be whole again. its cool that you still remember them! you must have REALLY loved them...hope you guys get to see each other again.

    leandra
    | Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Nirvana | [ Reply to This ]



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