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My diginity was lost in one sentece how could they belive him over me my life was ruined forever but my life is fucked up you see.... i was born in the projects raised in the hood everyone looked down on me i was so misunderstood then one day i met this girl she introduced me to this guy little did i know back then all they told were lies so at the age of um fourteen i started hustling drugs at the age of fifteen i was a hard core thug but then at the age of sixteen i started to pay attention to school all though the teachers really sucked most of the education ruled but let me back up right there cause at age ten i lost my virgo so by the time i was sixteen suck my dick was my logo you see cause a while back i learned that my actions towards guys weren't right and as the nigga's who can't get girls would say i had turned into a dyke right......... so back to my diginity at age seventeen shit went down and although wasn't still hustling to that guy and girl i was found the girl was okay but the guy was messed up so he took me to a room thinking he could get a quick fuck right..... so he raped me and i took his ass to court he was left off with no charges so i pulled out a newport so..... i started thinking i'm till a hard core thug and although i wasn't hustling i stil had alot of drugs meaning.......i still owned guns so he was walking down the street one day and i thought lets have fun i put the steel up to his head not up top the little one i shot his fucking dick off and landed a good five years so i didn't lose my dignity you see i really didn't care but what he lost was so important and to you who think that too all i have to say is fuck you The End |
well done... i liked it...umm...i think that u did have something that went on...cuz u seeem to write about rape lot...but who knows..man i like it..fav again... -Suicidalchild51- | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ] | well well this was cool i think you used so to much but it was still a good poem dont get me wrong or anything but i think you had a relly bad life keep up te good work ok | Love, Serenity Blade | Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ] | It was different. Sounds like you had a bad ass life. Iim sorry. BUt maybe things will get better if you keep writing... It was not a bad poem. It is good work. It made it more meaningful when you used profanity. Made it more real. | Keep it up. God BLess | Posted on 2005-08-15 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ] | Oh my. And you're saying this isn't from experience? Well thats good. Cause that's all f*ed up. Excellently written though. It reminded me of a story. Very creative. My favorite part was: | "i stil had alot of drugs meaning...i still owned guns so he was walking down the street one day and i thought lets have fun" Good thinking. I like the way you wrote this as if you were talking to someone. Makes it seem more real, you know? Anywho, this is awesome. I like it a lot. Great job ![]() -nikkki | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ] | |