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    dots Submission Name: Teacherdots
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    Author: chrls
    ASL Info:    43/m/louisiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 43/56/16
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 701
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1228



    Description:
       I'm a teacher at a technical college, and we are currently between semesters, so I penned this one today.


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    dotsTeacherdots
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    To undertake so great a task
    to mold a mind or remove a mask
    that hides the face of disbelief
    and covers up self doubting grief.
    To bring to life some mode of thought
    where once before was but naught.
    To shed some light on things unknown
    or plant a seed where none has grown.
    All these things are done with love
    and seem to be the duties of...
    A Teacher

    To instill knowledge where none was before
    to clear out barriers and closing doors.
    Giving understanding to those in need
    a special call it is to heed.
    To give so freely of oneself
    and help dust cobwebs from the shelf
    of a mind so eager to learn new things
    to give hearts hope; imaginations wings.
    All this is done to satisfy
    the what, where, how and why.

    To motivate and give new skills
    to an opened mind that yearns for thrills.
    Though some may sit and blankly stare
    it doesn't take away the care
    that is given to those who ask so oft
    to have thoughts lifted to an airy loft.
    Always done without push or shove
    these are daily duties of...
    A Teacher




    Submitted on 2005-08-16 13:08:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear
    Fuzzy Wuzzy didn't care
    Fuzzy Wuzzy wasn't fuzzy
    was he?
    Don't know why this popped into my head, but there it is.
    Oh the poem wasn't too bad either
    your friend
    ben
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear
    Fuzzy Wuzzy didn't care
    Fuzzy Wuzzy wasn't fuzzy
    was he?
    Don't know why this popped into my head, but there it is.
    Oh the poem wasn't too bad either
    your friend
    ben
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      This is an awsome tribute to teachers. definately original and clever. the rhyme sceme was persect and original and te meter was unaltered. It read smoothly all the way through and it seems that your english teacher taght you alot! I can not find any thing to complain about. Great poem!!

    robert
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by robertbwell | [ Reply to This ]


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