Wow...its about Justin isn't it? What happened to you two? He wont tell me much about it... I liked this poem a lot...the title is eye catching and I can feel the emotion that went into it...reading it made me want to be all like...'yeah you stupid cancerous snake...' I liked this poem a lot...very good job my friend... So you may get out of Tennessee...YAY...bestest of wishes..I pray for you friend...
Oh HELL YEAH! U go. A excellant choice of verbage to describe your anger. I loved the connection betweencancer and snakes. Two completely differant entities yet both despised. He musta really peed u off. very nicely done your friend ben
This is one of the better poems i have read lately. I think the metaphore of the snake and a guy is brilliant. Guys are typically known as being snakes i my self have slithered in the grass before and you made the comparison orinal. I like how you used the zodiac, an animal, and a disease to describe someone who has brought you trouble. All the basics are great: meter, structure and flow, they all combind in harmanoy to make a wonderfull poem.
cancerous boy of lies... i love this line it was a great way to end a very ulluring poem. I cant say i have ever pictured a man as a snake... plenty of women, but not men. either way I know the intention of men is sometimes to hurt you and then haunt you forever within your dreams. talk to you later, ella
I think this poem described me perfectly the only thing i want to do to you is make you hurt.Im such a horrible person,but your no better you use me for your own personal gain and i let you.lol.You just wish you were a snake.[censored]