Thais made me wanna cry...I liked this poem a lot too... I really liked the stanza... 'she sits by the phone so she can answer a call that won't be returned'
It's...meaningful...ya know? I am sorry about you and Justin...and me and Justin...and Justin in general I suppose... I liked this poem a lot...in this one I could feel the emotion as well... Very good job my friend...
once again another good one. This one seems more free and i like how you used the third person to describe your self. An i can relate to the part about calling and not getting an answer. It gives you a sick feeling in you stomache and makes you feel helpless. i hope things go well.
this is an incredibly emotionaly draing poem... in a good way though. desperation and sorrow is drenched in your words. by the way i love kurt i miss his music Ssooo much. they found his body on my birthday. my birthday has been bittersweet ever since. anyway, good write. talk to you later, ella