Description: This is just the second of a 3 piece saga.. that describes the feeling of performing your poetry in front of the crowd.. and the emotions you get..
this is from personal experience... so any comments, welcome
Poetic Minds.... Part 2 -------------------------------------------
The crowd screams encore
As the rapper seems hardcore
The sweat shines in the spotlight
Hearing the screams, a great night
The mic grasped tight
With these words, he starts his fight
Traveling down the path of his mind
Showing everybody his wraith
He's bout to stop time
Reality hits hard
As he walks off stage
As he finishes off the second page
Emotions run deep
The veins in the words are delicate
A wrong mark, and they will bleed
Tears or Fear?
It's only the beats you need to hear
Whether it's from your heart
Or from the music
You just gotta tear it apart
The second chapter has been complete
My dedication, not the money, is what pays
This is the end of the second phase
I remember performing one of my poems in front of the class, good god I was shaking more than a child on crack. (excuse the cheesy joke ) I find it easier to sing, than to say it. Juust the fact of taking your words...your own "blood" (so it seems) and throwing it out there is nerve-racking. Wondering if they'll hate it, love it, but then wondering 'why the [censored] should I care?' But the rush, oh the rush of performing is worth every minute of nervousness. Alright now I'm starting to ramble, a good second piece, tell me when the 3rd comes out! ~Kat
i've never performed any of my peices in front of a crowd so i don't know how it feels but it seems 2 be more of an adrenaline rush. hey i'm still waiting 4 the 3rd piece cade. i know u won't disappoint homie. "troy"
As a spoken word artist, I must say that you described some of the feelings on stage very well. Nicely done. The fear is crazy the first couple of times but the applause and standing ovations overbears the fear. Nice piece...
this is so awsome! damn i loved how the words were expressed...how they made the description clear! you have a great talent in your poetry..how they always have the rap tone and how they make the message so simple! Kay
i liked this. it was really straight up and it said what needed to be said.
i swing my sword from an amplifier chord even when the writing is slow, yo, i ain't ever got bored floored from the verses i embrace and curse out in front of twenty strong that i call my crowd i scream my word loud so the meaing can be felt in the blood trickling down your neck my mic and my pen silenced another one~P