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    dots Submission Name: My Special Childdots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Special Childdots
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    Laying in the hospital room,
    hooked to monitors.
    Beeping sound they say is good.
    Soon its time for another contraction.
    Look of concern on docters face
    as he watches the monitor.
    Rushing to delivery room,
    somthing is very wrong.
    Watching docters face,
    as he helps my child be born.
    Anxiety and fear is what I see.
    Its over and its a boy.
    No tears or crying from his little body.
    Three months later, growth is very limited.
    Tests show brain damage.
    Future is dim for the child of mine.
    Woe is me I cried.
    Gods angels in my dreams,
    clearing my mind and heart.
    My son is a special child and
    God only gives special parents
    this precious gift.
    Cannot walk or talk,
    write or paint.
    Never drive a car,
    fall in love,
    or father a child.
    All the people that know him
    love him.
    For he is God's special gift to this world.
    My Special Child




    Submitted on 2005-08-16 16:36:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this was cool. it touched me. my lil cousin's premature but he may walk when he gets older. he's gotten pretty smart and he can talk some. everybody loves him and he's hillarious. this poem reminded me of him and how special these children are. i guess that makes you a special person since u were given such an extraordinary child
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! What a breathtaking poem! I could actually feel your fear, your pain and then the moments of pure joy for such having a wonderful gifted child. May God bless you! He knew who would make the most wonderful, loving and gifted Mother.
    Smiles,,LindaH.
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! Not only do you have a very special child but you sound like a very special mum with an awful amount of strength...it is very well written although i do feel as though you could have made the reader really feeel the great emotion that must come with this a little better but thats just me...keep writing :)
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      It brought tears to my eyes and I have not cried in years. I wish you the best life has to offer and that you keep writting this wonderfully all through it!
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      A very nice & touchy poem,I wanted to read something like this and I found one. I never could have thought anything like this.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by anonymous69 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. I've never seen a poem quite like this, but its damn good. Seriously I never would've thought of a poem like this, and it holds meaning unlike others. I really like it, especially the point of view that holds an ironic tune.
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by Naymless | [ Reply to This ]
      You are so right about them being special! It's a difficult task but God never gives you anything you can't truly handle.
    In my work with the Special Olympics I find that I learn so much from these special people and they remind me of the innocence of life and having a great attitude!
    Thanks for sharing and God Bless! Love,Peace,Joy! tif ; )
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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