The Story of a girl
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The Story of a girl
She sits in class Doesnt say a word A teachers Pet they call her But not a voice she's heard She goes home She's got the rope in her hand She's terrified But this is her only chance To escape these voices All around in her head She wont take anymore She puts herself to rest Her mother comes home And is overcome with dread She looks in the closet To find her only child dead It's a sad event And everyone cries After a while a few day go by And everyone goes back to their normal lives This is a true story of a tragic end To a girl who just set trend Suicide is at it's best No one knows who'll be next. |
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| I liked this poem.And it's so true.The things people do to others and make them want to die.So they get so fed up with it they just happen to do it.And you never know who will be next.So true.Very nice. [-Candace-] | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ] | Nice way of showing how life has its trials and tribulations. | You are a good poet and need to keep on writing about stuff in life cause that's what you seem to do your best at. Even if it doesn't seem perfect just keep it up and don't stop even if you feel you have nothing else left to write about. | Posted on 2005-09-30 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ] | Hm... Should "Know one knows" be "No one knows"? | In all, it's true that such things do happen, and it being a trend, I have to agree as well. It's sad, isn't it? You manged to bring out this tragedy well, and also how life goes on for others, related or not. Keep it up. | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by whchong | [ Reply to This ] | Nice poem I can relate. I like how it captures how much of wt life is like when that happens before and after, but in such simple words | | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by Silent_Tears | [ Reply to This ] | I like this because everyone can relate.I like how you refered suicide to a trend.It does seem to be that because everyone seems to be talking about it or knew someone who did it.I'm sorry if you feel like you want to kill yourself sometimes.We've all been there.Keep Writing! | | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by giver_of_death | [ Reply to This ] | Very good. It had a nice flow. The tragic outcome of some of our children is so sad. | Your words brought out the tragic but how one must go on. But I'm sure not everyone is normal inside.The love ones will live with it the rest of there lives. Keep writing God Bless | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ] | |
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