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    dots Submission Name: Happy and Saddots
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    Author: soul_driven
    ASL Info:    22/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 23/26/14
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 238
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    dotsHappy and Saddots
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    Happy and sad... sad and happy,
    Some days my life is so very crappy.
    Then other days when you're around,
    My happy days are again found.
    Every night I kneel and pray,
    That I will see you the coming day.
    You light up my life,
    Your brightness blinds my strife.
    My world begins anew,
    When I am around you.
    I am very sad,
    For what I have never had.
    I beg for a kiss,
    To bring me such bliss.
    I will carry a smile,
    One that will last a long while.
    Because now and forever my lips would know,
    The sweetness of lips more pure than new fallen snow.




    Submitted on 2005-08-17 14:36:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      huh...this was to deep for me to actually understand...cuz if you read my poems they are kinda just retarded things that i just wrote cuz i could so yeah ill shut up and let someone with a high IQ tell you what they thought about it
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by Cho | [ Reply to This ]
      It was very enlightening to read. Great flow of words. I can relate to these words. Great work. Keep it up and I look forward to reading more from you.
    God Bless
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good. The rhyming was good and didn't overpower the piece; instead it added a reason to finish (because I just can't resist something that rhymes). My favorite part is the last, it's really beautiful.
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by thesinoftaima | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this alot. It was a little to joyful for me,but I'm full of gloom and only look upon the dark side of things. It was very good. Keep up the good work.

    >:D
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]



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