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    dots Submission Name: Carpe Diemdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 559
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    Description:
       Doing a frustrating proposal & just had to get something out. lol!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif ; )


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    dotsCarpe Diemdots
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    Carpe diem ~
    awake and seize
    this day

    Blindly I have traversed
    the mountains of the
    map of my heart and way

    I have visited the desert
    and walked with the spirit
    in the vastness of Life

    Truth the shield
    and Love the sword
    that protect me from all strife

    Today I painted
    the sky a smile
    bringing Peace
    unto the lands

    And from my heart
    the soul of one
    placed unconditional love
    into my hands








    Submitted on 2005-08-17 18:06:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh for unconditional love... I like your writing style, it gives out differeng images whilst still sticking to the knitting - well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      i love that you painted the sky a smile..
    your gusto for life and love shine through here Tiff. i can tell that you are a person who truly practices unconditional love. there is certainly not enough of it in this world, we could all take a page from your book.
    Carpe Diem indeed!
    peace&joy
    @ Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the way you change the type of writting from using a real common saying to start it off but still having the writting so intelegent. excellent.
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by eowyn | [ Reply to This ]
      once again another moving piece this was very spiritual and yet so kind
    almost like love and death combining
    very nice as you used beautiful images to paint a beautiful thought
    i am glad you liked my version of untitled
    i have found i keep my lost family members in my heart alwaz you no its funny i have only been writing for 2 and a half years but some of my thoughts go back to my childhood almost 40 years
    i am glad you enjoyed black and white it is a good story even if the othe comments dont think so
    hope all is well
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so beautiful.

    Truth the shield
    and Love the sword
    that protect me from all strife

    That is a poem in and of itself! This is a wonderful mantra and something I will read again and again. Thank you.

    +Jo
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by whisperslove | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved the way you are so good with using imagery. The flow was great also. I was a little lost about the poem but I enjoyed reading it all the same. Great job.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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