Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
    • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
    • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Ms.Stressdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: drk_angl_17
    ASL Info:    21/f/TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 652/690/83
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 417
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 921



    Description:
       This was written for Crystal to cheer her up...Its a bunch of the things we always say...you know those cute, funny little sayings and inside jokes all best friends have?;)


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMs.Stressdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Ms.Stress

    You fill my heart
    with friendly love
    Thank god above
    -oh wait, thats me!-

    You took my pickle
    didnt even give me a nickel
    but its okay
    cuz I gots your cherry!:)

    We're gonna die!
    but dont squirt yet
    it might get in your eye
    and we wouldnt want that...

    Look, its a deer!
    Your biggest fear.
    Look the other way...MINE!
    Lets see you do that!

    Gross, he has a third leg!
    He's yours, he's yours.
    Only cuz you beg and beg.
    Bet you could SO do that!:P

    You can be a fairy
    or Virgin Mary...
    You can be anything
    when you're on your knees!:)

    My loverly Mistress
    do not distress.
    This was all for you
    now I bid you, adue...







    Submitted on 2005-08-17 18:59:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I found myself thinking then ended up here. You know how your poetry always helped. This made me laugh remimbering it all again. Is it wrong to miss you so much? Anyways I realised I never posted on this very good write even though were the only two that truely understands it. *Hugs*

    Love Always
    Crystal
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by fallen_angl_2 | [ Reply to This ]
      ha.
    i love the first two stanzas dude...ha.
    words that come to the mind:
    hoe, slut, hooker, prostetute, lady of the night, harlet, and certain names of [censored]es i know.
    this was totally not what i remember bout you, but thats ok i mean change is good i think i need to change...hmm...its good reading your [censored] again
    rhaine
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      That was cute in it's own way..... must be nice to be that good of friends. I have to say that some of your work has lightened up a bit. Not so dark... must be something in the air?????
    LOL. Keep up the good work.

    Unicorn poet
    | Posted on 2006-09-07 00:00:00 | by Unicorn Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      you guys are really retards. its nice to know that out of 3 you still have one best friend that you consider. i dont guess we'll ever be the same again huh? well thats ok as long as your happy. ive got cj...for a while until they move and i dont have a way to see her anymore...this really doesnt have much to do with your poem does it? sorry -it just striked a nerve that i didnt know i had anymore. good day.
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by sweet-fire | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting, makes me want to know what those inside jokes are, but from the looks of it, i think i'll leave that one alone. i like flow of this poem and if i knew what you were talking about, i'd prolly laugh, too. nice job

    dylanpoe's girl
    | Posted on 2005-08-17 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]
      ahahha thought it was funny even though I didn't get it, lol. Inside jokes are the best. Anyways, thanks for making me laugh...
    //miss//
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Its All A Lie | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?    		7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    70964



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry