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    Author: poetry89
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 159
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 898



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    As good as gold
    As good as new
    As good as the love
    I have for you

    As strong as the hate
    As strong as the pain
    As strong as the stars
    And the mist of the rain

    It might have no meaning
    It might have a lot
    It might be worth saying
    You're all that I've got

    It's not worth temptation
    To tell you I can't
    It's all about you
    No matter whom you enchant

    As warm as your heart
    As warm as your light
    As warm as a bed
    That's been slept in all night

    As cool as your hands
    As col as your friends
    As cool as your ego
    This is where it all ends

    I just may have loved you
    Guess you were too cool
    Next time you get a mate
    Try not to be such a fool




    Submitted on 2005-08-17 20:47:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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