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    dots Submission Name: The Crystal Chandelierdots
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    Author: ebflannery
    ASL Info:    24/
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 184/184/48
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 293
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 371



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    dotsThe Crystal Chandelierdots
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    broken crystal chandelier
    shattered pieces laying on the floor
    grab the broom, sweep them up
    just throw the fragments away
    miss the pretty rainbow spectrums
    that were displayed along the wall
    and the soft illuminations
    so gentile to the eyes
    but don't mend the pieces again
    that would be a waste of time




    Submitted on 2005-08-17 22:24:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmmm...broken glass lying on the floor...sounds familier. hehehe...

    Anyway (I hate it when I chuckle like a girl...I gotta quit that) you did a good job on this piece. I like laying better than lie as well, good substitution.

    You painted a good picture of this, I like the fact that you flashed back to your memory of what the glass did before it was broken and you finish strong with your- "that would be a waste of time."

    We must work with our broken pieces mustn't we, but lets not throw them away. Good write kid. Lefty .
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by leftof_red | [ Reply to This ]



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