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Author:	giver_of_death
ASL Info:	15/f/can
Elite Ratio:	3.89 - 99/71/16
Words:	216

Class/Type:	Rant/Angry
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I wote this because i felt like it.I don't need anyhelp changing it because its how I feel.No one needs to tweek my feelings.'But please read it anyway.

My Angry Poem dots

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I hate my life and everyone in it.Everyones so fake.No one listens to me.They set such high standards for themselves and when they don't come through they take it out on me.I wish I could be alone in my world of nothing.No one cares so whats the point in living.Everyones nagging at me and yelling.I just want to die.No one gets me.I just want someone to hear me.To really listen.I want to shrivel up and die.Like anyone would notice.I just need someone to be there for me listen and understand.No yelling,No screaming,just quiet.I hope I die tonight so no one will have to pretend to talk to me and I don't have to live with them and deal with their fakeness and pretend smailes and fake acts of kindness.I'm sick of it all!I just want to go somewhere by myself and be left alone.I hate wasting my life away but whats the point in doing anything?I'll be critized no matter what.No one notices or cares.My head aches because I don't know what to do.I'm confused and I just want it all over.I just want everything to stop.
Please help.

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| Posted on 2006-11-11 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]
  In reading this and then the comments all I can say is, didn't anyone read the fact that this was a rant? It pains me to read stuff like this. There's always going to be someone out there that cares, even when it seems that you're so completely alone and that no one gives a schiznit. Stay true to yourself and if people don't like that, then screw em. We are more than capable of creating our own happiness. I do know what it is like to be in this place. It sucks, but there's always a way to come out of it and I sure hope that these feelings have changed. It's a crappy place to be. Take care!

Candi
| Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
  I wish I could help you with that. But in order to do so, I'd have to kill all the mean fake people, and there are just too many. I'd run out of places to hide the bodies. (lol I'm just kidding.)
It's not often that you find a truly nice person. Most of them are [censored]s.
For some reason, I can relate to every word you said (...or typed) in one way or another.
I like the way it doesn't really have a particular order or structure... because thats how thoughts are. It's honest, (in my opinion) the way a rant should be.
Very nicely done

-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-04-05 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah ...it is not a poem.. i agree with the girl that said u had posted it on ur journal ... i dunno. i get bored with the first two lines.. welll... but u can do it better if u want .. organizing ur ideas and dont write using too common words ... bye and take care!
peace and love!
| Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
  im with poetic cure, Im sorry but I kinda got bored after the first couple lines. It doesnt really seem like a poem. I think you should have resorted to a journal instead.
| Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]
  this doesent even seem like a poem at all more like a cry out or something, were all human and ur saying people in this world are fake well ur trying to fake it as a poet with this one sorry
| Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by stateXofXmind | [ Reply to This ]
  I lost interest in it half way through. Sorry!
Seems like all jumbled togather. Maybe its just me. I like things broken up so can read easier. I did however get the feeling the author was very angry in general. Hope life gets better for you.
God bless
| Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
  I can realte and if you are the only one that cares about you let it be that way, you are really the only one that can make the choices in your life or have to live with what is given, if the people that surround you are fake, then forget them or just dont be a "friend" to them. You have to set boundries for yourself of what you allow to happen to you.
My mom told me something when I had problems with people that your reaction is the only control they will have over you, never be controlled! It does work and it is not easy but it is a test of controlling the way you react and the way you allow others to act tward you.
With such strong words and seen talent..you will get better at it and it will fall into place as much as that statement seems wrong it will I promise.
Always be there for yourself, you have to love & respect you or no one else will.
I hope this helps I know it is tough but you seem even tougher.
Denise
| Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  i can relate these people and their bull[censored] expectations, i admitted i take my anger out on them to but hey we all human, keep writing
| Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by tammytompkins | [ Reply to This ]

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