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    dots Submission Name: Peggy's Smiledots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 768
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 148



    Description:
       Another one of my seniors where I volunteer passed away - Peg. Peg was 86 and was ready to pass - she saw her husband (gone 10 years) and wasn't scared at all - she never really spoke but through her smiles. I thank her for the time I got to spend with her and the smiles she shared with me.
    This is simple but that's just how she was. God Bless Peg!
    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )


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    dotsPeggy's Smiledots
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    Peg ~

    A
    Shining
    M
    I
    L
    Eternal
    v
    e
    r
    y
    o
    n
    enjoyed




    Submitted on 2005-08-18 16:05:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very meaningful. Short and sweet - but much sentiment and meaning behind it - that I could tell. Long live Peg in your words.
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet, yet it still has enough meaning to hold up the world. I'd give it a 8.2 out of ten. Keep the poems comming!
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Naymless | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it... its cute and something all the first graders learned but u used it diferent and i like that. keep up the awesome work.
    love
    tian
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was so nice of you to dedicate a poem to Peg. And I'm glad you shared this story with us with a beautiful poem in her memory.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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