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Dive


Author: giver_of_death
Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 106 /72 /18
Words: 135
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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THIS IS NOT MY WRITING.IT IS BY KURT COBAIN.I JUST FOUND THIS AND I WANTED TO POST IT BECAUSE IT MADE SENSE.PLEASE COMMENT ON IT.


Dive



Pick me-Pick me Yeah
Let a low long signal
At ease at least yeah
everyone is hollow
Pick me- Pick me yeah
everyone is waiting
Pick me- Pick me yeah
you can even pay them

Dive Dive Dive Dive in me

Kiss this- Kiss that yeah
let a low long signal
at ease alease yeah
you can be my hero
pick me pick me yeah
everyone is waiting
Hit me Hit me yeah
I'm real good at hating


THIS IS WRITING BY KURT COBAIN SO DON'T TELL ME "GOOD WRITE"JUST TELL ME HOW IT MAKES YOU FEEL AND IF IT MOVES YOU LIKE IT DID ME.




Submitted on 2005-08-18 16:19:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This I like. I am a big kurt cobain fan, have been since i first heard the song smells like teen spirit years and years ago. I even bought the "Gone but not forgotten" T-shirt when he supposidly passed away, which I think is alot of bs myself. I feel his words well, as easy as it is to listen to what he had to say. Thank you for postithis, I haven't heard it in years. One would think that you are a Cobain fan as well, which if you are I have to give you coodose for liking the greatest rocker of all times. He was the only rocker I could understand even when he screamed into the mic. If you want one hell of a day, go visit hi memorial park in seatle washington. It is freaking awesome. once again thanks for putting this up!
~Rob~
| Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by ThisIsReal | [ Reply to This ]
  honestly... I dont get it.
Pick me-Pick me Yeah
Let a low long signal
At ease at least yeah
everyone is hollow
Pick me- Pick me yeah
everyone is waiting
Pick me- Pick me yeah
you can even pay them

Dive Dive Dive Dive in me

Kiss this- Kiss that yeah
let a low long signal
at ease alease yeah
you can be my hero
pick me pick me yeah
everyone is waiting
Hit me Hit me yeah
I'm real good at hating
any of it. Oh I did that cuz it wouldnt let me post untill I did.
| Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]


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