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    dots Submission Name: The Morning DJ'zdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 622
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 515



    Description:
       The dj's that used Chicken & Ribs for a restaurant commercial wanted to see what I could come up with about them on the spur of the moment.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif ; )


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Morning DJ'zdots
    -------------------------------------------



    From dreaming
    to streaming wake up
    with Rubin & Sims
    on KWOD

    Beck, Gorillaz &
    Death Cab for Cutie,
    along with Seth's
    new music Pod

    Movie reviews
    social commentary
    & comedy

    If you need
    a mornin jumpstart
    Rubin & Sims the remedy

    Start the day
    right on
    KWOD.net

    With less commercials
    it's your
    best bet!




    Submitted on 2005-08-18 16:28:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Excellent! They'll be comissioning you as a regular!

    Nice work Tif!
    | Posted on 2011-06-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Nothing better than a DJ to get the day off to a good start. For something that was created on the spot and I presume 'under pressure' it was very good.
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha... are u a dj or do u just write for them?? i love it! i think it was cute. keep it up. i truly hope to read more amazing work by you
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2005-08-18 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Not bad. I can almost hear this on the radio. I think you need to send this to them. I liked it alot. You sold me on the ad! lol. Nice work.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      lol

    That was fun to read.
    I am guessing that this is a real radio sation on the net.
    I might have to check it out.

    Very clever there Tiff.


    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      hi how ae you thanx fo the comment on rewind
    seems like eveyone is on the punctuation thing again
    i think the words speak for themselves
    your post would make a good commecial for this station
    good job
    i am going to give the writing a rest for awhile not sure how long take cae and will be back in awhile
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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