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    dots Submission Name: sand bellsdots

    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       the story of everything and nothing

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    dotssand bellsdots

    From the ocean depths
    and the desert reaches
    the call of sands
    can be heard
    even on mountains
    and in valleys
    the rhythm is the same.

    As sands
    tell their stories
    in all lands
    treaded by breath.

    A story as old as time
    yet the future
    which is awaited.

    The sands
    weave their tales
    in tunes ever changing
    yet still the same.

    The sands
    speak of love and hate
    of death and life.

    The sands
    the sands tell of
    everything and nothing.

    Submitted on 2005-08-19 04:39:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is pretty. like the mood of it is pretty. does that make sense. i mean how u used sand to tell wat u were trying to say i never would have thought of that.
    ~akaila evonne~
    noticed no one commented so i was like hey why not!
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the mood as well the words are so wonderfl! lol and i like the overall poem all together it had a nice form and good flow good job. i really liked it.
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by ira | [ Reply to This ]
      it gave me fortune teller sense over my shoulder, but you always seem to do that. i like how you write about such simple things but then make then sound like so much more , make them sound like the world needs them
    good write
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]

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