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    dots Submission Name: Past Meet Presentdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Happy Friday Elitists!
    Enjoy the weekend!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; }

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    dotsPast Meet Presentdots

    In this hand
    I have penned

    Thoughts of truth
    weaved with strings
    of Folklore

    Just as the lake
    portrays the image
    of shore

    The invisible wind
    allows the bird
    2 soar ~*~

    Limbs contourted
    in natural

    Fluorishing green
    without a

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      Thank you for this picture, were we standing on an island or in a bost , to see this view? beautiful
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      What would we do without nature. The invisable wind allowing the bird to soar is a lovely line and planted an image in my mind. As usual, well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww... As I read it I felt the wind blow in my hair. LOL.I defineltly felt it, good flow.
    - This was nice.
    Epiphany- Check out my work!
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      wow!another simply amzing write from you tiff!.makes me wanna hug you...:)

    Nature brings so much joy ...and thanks for bringing nature back to us again and again...:)

    I loved

    Just as the lake
    portrays the image
    of shore

    ...beautiful...and yes, how the invisible wind allows the bird to soar..simply breezy! and cool!
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      once again a vey heartfelt peace the scenery in you thought was fantastic like your othe comments say very nice having a better day today than yesterday thanx much for you comments
    hope all is well
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I think it is a really great poem. A few things I wanted to point out... Contorted is spelled wrong, just thought Id point that out. The last verse's rhythm seemed off.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by jaggedwords | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this a lot...it was beautiful...it had a sort of a melodic flow to it...it was lovely...
    It had a good concept...
    I liked this poem a lot...you are good at what you do...

    Peace Love And Pancakes My Friend

    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved this poem to. It was just so easy flowing and enjoyable to read. I loved the format of the poem. I think that you truly capture the heart and soul of nature in your work. Great job.
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful Tiff.. i love

    Limbs contorted
    in natural

    your love for nature always shines through in your poems.. i could feel that invisible wind.. see the tree limbs praying.. nature is so healing. thanks for reminding us all of that!
    @ Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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