[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Past Meet Presentdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 611
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 405


    Happy Friday Elitists!
    Enjoy the weekend!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; }

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPast Meet Presentdots

    In this hand
    I have penned

    Thoughts of truth
    weaved with strings
    of Folklore

    Just as the lake
    portrays the image
    of shore

    The invisible wind
    allows the bird
    2 soar ~*~

    Limbs contourted
    in natural

    Fluorishing green
    without a

    Submitted on 2005-08-19 11:33:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you for this picture, were we standing on an island or in a bost , to see this view? beautiful
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      What would we do without nature. The invisable wind allowing the bird to soar is a lovely line and planted an image in my mind. As usual, well done.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww... As I read it I felt the wind blow in my hair. LOL.I defineltly felt it, good flow.
    - This was nice.
    Epiphany- Check out my work!
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      wow!another simply amzing write from you tiff!.makes me wanna hug you...:)

    Nature brings so much joy ...and thanks for bringing nature back to us again and again...:)

    I loved

    Just as the lake
    portrays the image
    of shore

    ...beautiful...and yes, how the invisible wind allows the bird to soar..simply breezy! and cool!
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]
      once again a vey heartfelt peace the scenery in you thought was fantastic like your othe comments say very nice having a better day today than yesterday thanx much for you comments
    hope all is well
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I think it is a really great poem. A few things I wanted to point out... Contorted is spelled wrong, just thought Id point that out. The last verse's rhythm seemed off.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by jaggedwords | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this a lot...it was beautiful...it had a sort of a melodic flow to it...it was lovely...
    It had a good concept...
    I liked this poem a lot...you are good at what you do...

    Peace Love And Pancakes My Friend

    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved this poem to. It was just so easy flowing and enjoyable to read. I loved the format of the poem. I think that you truly capture the heart and soul of nature in your work. Great job.
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful Tiff.. i love

    Limbs contorted
    in natural

    your love for nature always shines through in your poems.. i could feel that invisible wind.. see the tree limbs praying.. nature is so healing. thanks for reminding us all of that!
    @ Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Dream written by closetpoet
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]