Description: I wrote this poem in the memory of my dead friend Said.
Rest in peace -------------------------------------------
You have gone my friend
we're all going to miss you Said.
You have gone phyiscally
but you'll always live in our
hearts, souls and minds.
Rest in peace my dear
God bless your soul.
All my deepest thougths
and all my sorrows for your family.
Calm yourself into your grave
God'll take care of your children.
I'll pray for God to forgive your sins
and enter you His paradise.
" From dust and to dust we'll return."
Ohh thats so sad. I almost cried. I'm really sorry about your friend. It's sad that something so beautiful has to come from something like death. The words you used are awesome. Good luck with everything. You're talented. Great job
I'm soooo sorry about your loss.. This is a real sweet poem.. It felt to me as if it came completly from the heart, and your soul.. Keep using this passion in your poetry and you will see a lot of appreciation in your times of posting things on here.
Hi I would like to tell you first fo all how sorry I am about your loss. I think this poem is a wonderful tribute to your late friend. This is a great way to show your love and respect towards your late friend.
as I have said before if you need anyone to talk about it just let me know.
May your friends soul rest in piece. With lots of love your friend Shabnam With lots of love shabnam
This write was strong in its' conveyance of loss. The words expressed are as stone. A good work from the heart. This does not read like a poem to me, but as a letter to a friend. A good write.
Submission Name: Rest in peace
