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    dots Submission Name: Rest in peacedots
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    Author: Khaled AbdAllah
    ASL Info:    22 - male - Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 129/137/30
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 1020
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       I wrote this poem in the memory of my dead friend Said.


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    You have gone my friend
    we're all going to miss you Said.
    You have gone phyiscally
    but you'll always live in our
    hearts, souls and minds.
    Rest in peace my dear
    God bless your soul.

    All my deepest thougths
    and all my sorrows for your family.
    Calm yourself into your grave
    God'll take care of your children.
    I'll pray for God to forgive your sins
    and enter you His paradise.
    " From dust and to dust we'll return."




    Submitted on 2005-08-19 14:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ohh thats so sad. I almost cried. I'm really sorry about your friend. It's sad that something so beautiful has to come from something like death. The words you used are awesome. Good luck with everything. You're talented. Great job

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm soooo sorry about your loss.. This is a real sweet poem.. It felt to me as if it came completly from the heart, and your soul.. Keep using this passion in your poetry and you will see a lot of appreciation in your times of posting things on here.

    Keep it up

    ~Blindly-N-Love~
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi I would like to tell you first fo all how sorry I am about your loss. I think this poem is a wonderful tribute to your late friend. This is a great way to show your love and respect towards your late friend.

    as I have said before if you need anyone to talk about it just let me know.

    May your friends soul rest in piece.
    With lots of love your friend Shabnam
    With lots of love shabnam
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
      This write was strong in its' conveyance of loss. The words expressed are as stone. A good work from the heart. This does not read like a poem to me, but as a letter to a friend. A good write.
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Malcolm Bishop | [ Reply to This ]


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