I have to disagree with the previous two. The length of a poem is irrelevant. I think length is a preference. This poetry that has painted a picture, eloquently. This poem has nothing more to say because it speaks volumes. It is deep. 'For nothing hidden by the darkness will not the next day shine' This phrase it self could almost stand alone because of the power that lay within it.
This was a beatiful picture you painted for the reader here. The sun set over the horizon on a nice summer night is one of the wonders of nature in my eyes. I want to see the sun set and rise over the ocean sometime in my life cause I bet tha is a sight ot behold.
this was very subtle and vey picturous i could feel the warm sun and smell the wine thanx fo yor comment on wilderness i am glad you enjoyed the words dripping down the page is good thanx sandman hope all is well
Another short but sweet poem by you. This was vivd in details and the flow was great. I think that you did just fine, by making this short as to bring home the fact it is the end of the day. Great job. Maggie