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    dots Submission Name: Cycle of Lifedots
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    Author: shmuzzelle
    ASL Info:    20/girl/canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 261/134/30
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 260
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 450



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       I seriously don't know where this came from. I think just out of nowhere. It started off as something else, but after a lot of scratches it turned out like this.


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    dotsCycle of Lifedots
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    A once old soul is starting over
    Reborn into a new set of circumstance
    Learning what was once known
    As well as some anew
    Each day posses a new meaning
    As the known becomes the familiar
    The old life is left behind
    As the new one becomes accepted
    Life is a constant education
    The diploma is earned only when the course is complete
    And then it is time
    To start the cycle again




    Submitted on 2005-08-19 16:20:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem mades me think that my whole life had just flashed before my eyes.

    Its very good.And i think that it should be read out or posted to some youngster around the world. (maybe it would help!)

    To me it makes me think about my own life and how i am still learning.
    I like the ending to becuase that is what will happen, will we start this cycle again???
    You caould say that it did raise some question about life and sticks in your mind after.

    Well done, keep it up

    bailey19
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]



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