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    dots Submission Name: Acting for a Livingdots
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    Author: shmuzzelle
    ASL Info:    20/girl/canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 261/134/30
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 302
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 872



    Description:
       I guess that right now I'm kind of battling against myself. People, please keep in mind that this is an artistic voice, and parts of this may or may not be true.

    P.S. Anyone with a suggestion for a title, please let me know. I just kind of ran out.


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    dotsActing for a Livingdots
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    Purple hair, facial piercings, tatoos,
    Offensive clothing are all
    The disguise I need
    To protect myself
    Underneath the black lipstick
    Behind the spider tatoo
    All I am is a scarred little girl
    Just trying to make my way
    In the only way I know how
    The burden of protection
    Often leaves you lonely
    Again I find my way
    Drugs, lots of drugs
    Take them away, and
    You lose what you do have
    Building the walls up for so long
    Hides the truth so well that
    It can never be found again
    The real me has been replaced
    By this actress who believes
    That she can take the leading role
    And protect the invaluable
    But her salary will never be high enough
    To pay the price of fear
    Of finding someone to
    Return her love




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      This is a mirror. I could see myself in it, I could read my thoughts, my own sketches, my pictures in it. Well, my disguise is a bit different than the one described here, but..yah. I feel sometimes that this actress is taking over, taking control, and I don't even fight against it, I cheer her on. There is nothing more to comment here. I wouldn't find any mistakes. You did a perfect job, honey. I loved it. Good work and please keep up!

    cheers
    drika
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by silverdrika | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that you have managed to cature this well. Thanks for writting it. I will keep this in fvorites and read it offten because i can see parts of me in this good well written piece.
    I did hit home and has help me in a way, i made a impression. Well done and keep it up.

    Bailey19
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]



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