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    dots Submission Name: Fly over the citydots
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    Author: HECATE_Sservant
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 120/141/42
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 292
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       A major change happened in my mindset. I tried to explain it. I would deeply appreciate any ideas to make it better. Enjoy...


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    dotsFly over the citydots
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    Fly over the city,
    look at all the lights.
    They're beautiful.
    Just let the wind caress my face.
    All the clouds look like cotton balls,
    just waiting for me land on one.
    Smile to myself,
    cause no one can see me.

    Does anyone else see this beauty?
    They must...
    I know I'm not alone.
    That's what keeps me flying
    instead of falling onto this beautiful town.
    Someone, somewhere is soaring completely unseen too through another city.
    I wish I could see you, touch you, know you're real.

    I don't mind being invisible.
    If I wasn't, I couldn't fly...
    I couldn't leave this place.
    I wouldn't be able to feel this wind on my body.
    I wouldn't see these clouds and these lights.
    I wouldn't think of anyone but me.
    But now I can fly away from here...
    Cause my gods told me,
    That I was never alone and now,
    it's time to leave...




    Submitted on 2005-08-19 18:29:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was beautiful! I felt like i was actually flying there right beside you. It's so different and unique and takes me back to somewhere i was when i was a kid.
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by nique | [ Reply to This ]
      That was wonderful to read. Like an angel flying above the world enjoying gods beauty
    I loved it. I shall put it in my favorites.
    Great job . Look forward to reading more
    God bless. Very refreshing.
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      this was soo diffrent i have never read naything quite like it its hard when there is so much talent out there to think of something that hasent already been done i loved the lines
    But now I can fly away from here...
    Cause my gods told me,
    That I was never alone and now,
    it's time to leave...
    lil wiccan there i think wich mkaes me think you were referreing to astreal projection where you ? maybe im reading into it i wont do that wont spoil it i cant wait to read your next post this one was truley amazing
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]



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