Description: I found that this poem was misunderstood. If you want to give it a shot, you can read the rest of the description after the poem.
It's actually about how easily we are forgotten after we die. I originally had it under the category of 'Political' but I changed it to Society when I found that people were trying to asssociate it with voting... :S
Timebomb
Bomb in time
Killing our words
Jumping with our souls
Show us our eyes
Suspended in sky
You can't hear our cries
We've already died
"In which cold playground
Do you which to lay?"
First you must pay,
First you must pay
There were our lives...
Written deep in the clay
unless you were just wanting to introduce something a little longer, kinda like a prologe, kinda summarizing a lot of points in this one.....
you had a good topic, to talk of society being like a timebomb.. eventually enough people will disapprove and think a little more when in the voting booths...
the playground line was kinda confusing, as so was the we've died already line because it wasnt explained......
Submission Name: Timebomb
