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    dots Submission Name: played by the crimedots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 578
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1063



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       to me this is the greatest thing I"ve written in a long time...I could be wrong...I'll let you guys decide that...


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    dotsplayed by the crimedots
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    the aberrant style, It's improved over the years
    now I'm 16, but in experience, I got 30 years
    with each rhyme that I write, I get over many fears
    and on the other hand, I done shed many tears
    I ain't god, can't make a bitch out of a rib
    I'm just the man in the mirror, so you got everything I can give
    I don't know what it is
    but man, I ain't gonna tripp
    I know you handle your bis.
    whatever it is or ain't
    you help your homies, even if you can't
    you a good man, don't let nobody say no different
    if they do then just give'em a big lip
    don't take shit
    don't make shit
    but if you have to, then deal with it
    be trustworthy, when you should
    make people leave you thinking good
    don't do drugs, well maybe weed
    but remember, you've sowed a seed
    It comes and haunt you, and there'll be a time
    where time is payed, you got played by the crime




    Submitted on 2005-08-20 00:52:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was excellent!I Loved it! man...i so wanna be a writer like you...my favorie parts of this poem was:

    now I'm 16, but in experience, I got 30 years
    with each rhyme that I write, I get over many fears
    and on the other hand, I done shed many tears

    and

    don't do drugs, well maybe weed
    but remember, you've sowed a seed
    It comes and haunt you, and there'll be a time

    those was my favs! great job on the poem!

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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