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    dots Submission Name: Freestyle: Do It Bigdots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 992
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1492



    Description:
       just a little freestyle conjured up while listening to a boosie track... happened to be on the submit page at the same time.. hope you like.....

    alcohol had a little to do with it too.. ;)


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    dotsFreestyle: Do It Bigdots
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    I smoke, I drank
    Like Mike jones
    underground
    I'm the leader of the tank
    Im a dawg, i like the nook
    Im more dangerous
    in the game
    then that bitch, suge
    penitentary
    or an epiphany
    wanna be thugs
    saying they want love
    wanna be gangstas
    claiming they bout gank
    when they nicknames
    is sticky and stank
    shady? or crazy?
    on this mic, im more ruggish
    than that fool lazie

    harmonizing
    synthesizing
    a pit with bite and no bark
    be careful insults
    cause sparks
    sparks cause a fire
    that burnt yo mamas house down
    wipe that smile of your face
    get off my "bad word"
    i don't kill clowns

    I introduce'em to manson
    Hang each one of the punks
    from hanson
    mmmmbop to this beat
    and while the shorties go ole school
    and bunny hop to me
    better believe
    another white emcee
    another white prodigy
    born with a pen in one hand
    and a bottle in the other
    You heard me before
    I learned the word mother
    absurd, but yet heard
    Word of mouth??
    or is it, The dirty south
    IN ME
    That made you look twice
    and said in this rapper
    I Believe
    He will succed
    cause im trying hard
    but my head keeps bobbing
    to the beat...




    Submitted on 2005-08-20 01:49:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Liked it, for whatever reason I don't know. Another write about who you are. Nothing wrong with that. Something new most of the time, so that's cool. Later kid.
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm gonna perform at my school's talent/variety/thing show later one this year. its gonna be off the chain. try to make it down. i'll tell troy bout it and we'll all have a party. woohoo.~P
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      THis started off kinda rocky to me. As though it took you a minute to really get on course. After a few lines...you seemed to have gotten the hang of it.

    I really liked the ending...that was a great finale.

    Keep it up. I'll stop by whenever I get a chance.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      I was feelin' this too, but I think this one of those raps that better heard than read. But it's still some illmatic sh!t yo...very tight!
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by L.i. | [ Reply to This ]
      that [censored] was damn good. mc and prodigy. both describe u very well. i hear u gone rock the mic at ur new school. hold it down. i was gonna copy and paste my favortie part but i might have copied too much cuz i liked the whole damn thing a lot. looks like a fave 2 me.
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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