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    dots Submission Name: Harlequindots
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    Author: YoungWerther
    ASL Info:    20/M/ Los Locos
    Elite Ratio:    4.14 - 69/92/65
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 226
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       poor dear fellows who spend an eternity of shame to live appropriately to what society deems socially acceptable


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    dotsHarlequindots
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    A mask of sterile magenta dyed poignantly,
    Hides the joke and his feasible mercies,
    Plausible audiences always conquer; enmities-,
    Reign over an under prepared bigotry,
    Dear Harlequin, efface that grin of Gold,
    And place thy mirror onto thine soul,
    Reflect among a hatred of all,
    Clown in life but sorrow of old,
    Picking up thine worn slippers-,
    Washed and faded among cold stone
    Memory dents thou slant brow; and moan-,
    For the day’s pay willingly festers-,
    Into the hands of Rent to pay thy ills,
    Smiling as you do, reading branded Vedas,
    Praying to anything that will say Hellas!
    Raising hope anew on those barren hills,
    Completing the day’s painful alms,
    Look onto yonder remorse,
    Death, my dear, takes its quick course,
    Waiting to end all mortal qualms.




    Submitted on 2005-08-20 11:59:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey, 'tis the Piggster here. First off, it's interesting that I'm saying this where I don't know you, but...WHY, oh, WHY arn't more people commenting on your beautiful works? I checked your archives, and see writings that have yet still to be critiqued. Speaking of which...
    The pain in 'Harlequin' is not one that I'm familiar with, but yet at the end of it, I had tears in my eyes. Even though the maturity of this work is beyond me, it still managed to touch me. Isn't it true, though? Arn't these clownish actors and actresses some of the sadess people in the world? Oh, the irony.
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by Trufflepiggy | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi,
    This piece is "art", a picture of words. A "harlequin" of such, hides all of his/her emotions thru laughter of others. Your picture show the teardrops of one eye signifying two chapters in life...one sad and one happy. Your work is truly emotional in a sense. A great write! take care wanda
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      Just when I thought the whole crying clown thing was starting to get old, I read this poem that went and refreshed it all over again! Lol, when I was reading this, the song 'Mr. Cellophane' was playing in my head and I saw Amos dancing. It was... a little creepy (Chicago is the last movie I've seen, and I saw it in the theatre). It's a good poem, though. When I was younger I tried to write a poem about sad clowns, but it turned out really bad, so I made a sattire of it. I don't really like clowns, lol.
    | Posted on 2005-08-20 00:00:00 | by Cetilearo | [ Reply to This ]



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