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    dots Submission Name: Can Youdots
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    Author: ebflannery
    ASL Info:    24/
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 184/184/48
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 220
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    Can you tell me the time and day
    Or your history or my name
    Will you allow me to spill all secrets
    Or to seduce you with my games
    Can you see through the fascades which exist
    With who you believe me to be
    And who I really am
    Or allow me to escape
    From the things which bind my wings
    Will you give me the power to free my heart
    From the glaciers of it's grave
    Can you accept my anger or compulsive laughter
    When things don't go my way
    Will you understand without questioning
    What I need and how I feel
    Are you strong enough to hold me high
    As I continue to fall
    Do not promise me the moon and stars
    If you cannot promise me all these things
    I will not accept less and be expected to smile
    When I want to learn my name




    Submitted on 2005-08-21 13:15:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sounds like there are a whole pile of unanswered questions that there are here, and im not an answer book but i enjoyed this poem, it had a sting to it which is not found so easily in other places,
    siriquelle,
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Siriquelle | [ Reply to This ]



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