This is great. The rhyming and flow was amazing. Excellent words and descriptions. I wish I could forget about the past and feel pure again. I've realized that it's a lot harder than it sounds. Oh well. Good luck with everything. I like this one a lot. Great job
This is sooooooooo good. I also sometimes wish it were that easy to be pure again but I guess it isn't. Anyway you have just put one wish in a poem. The usage of the correct words is what add more to the beauty of your poem. It is a very new topic. This is one of the best poems I have read on this site. You have chosen the best title it really captures ones attention, and the it is what titles suppose to do Well done with love shabnam
i liekd it. i've felt like that too. i think you protrayed your messege very well and the flow and wording was very good as well. i liked the theme. i've felt like well being pure again alot in my past so i think i understand where your comming form good job.
Submission Name: Holy Water
