Description: this poem is very meaningful to me. It marked my last days of teen angst and the beginning of a new phase away from where I grew up. I still remember it when I am depressed
L.I.W.L (live is worth living) -------------------------------------------
L.I.W.L
Life is worth living
remeber when things are bad
life is worth living
even when you feel sad
life is worth living
it doesn't matter what goes wrong
life is worth living
repeat this when you feel alone
life is worth living
remember when you want to cry
life is worth living
and stop saying that you want to die
because life is worth living
its the only thing you need to say
at the start of every single day
life is worth living
and smile more more and worry less
and no matter what always try your best
life is worth living
when you are about to be overcome by fear
don't forget that I'll always be near
to remind you to think L.I.W.L
whenever and wherever you feel depressed.
this started great and i still like it overall.its format and ryme scheme was not consistent through out.this is not important for me,but is for a lot of people. the message youre protraying is very nice also and overall i thought you did a goos job. could have been better though
damn right. thats awesome. i saved it as a favorite. cause i need to tattoo this poem to my arm. lol. :) i'm a [censored] sad loser. i need people like you around me. hahahahah. good work.
I agree with toys. It started out really great. The end became slightly choppy though. The repitition sort of took away from it, and the flow was slightly off. Other than the basics, the piece was rather good. Oh and the title says "Live is worth Living" Is it supposed to be "LiFe is worth Living" instead?
Submission Name: L.I.W.L (live is worth living)
