This was written very well The love for your daughter shines so bright Its so Beautiful to see For your Daughter will continue to carry that love forward making the World a more beautiful and safe place to be Thank You for sharing this Take Care Ron
You are going to make me cry over this one. This was so moving and emotional. I thought the fact it was a personal poem made this amazing. I know Laura will treasure this her whole life. Great job. Maggie
very sweet ode to your daughter. children are precious and need loving and nurturing guidance. it's refreshing to know there are people like you who cherish their children and are there for them throughout their lives. can't critique this one, it is from the heart. peace&childlove @ Cat
Awww! Elaine this is such a lovely poem for your daughter! I am sure this will warm her heart and put a smile on her face! This is very well written with beautiful heartfelt expression! I can only imagine the bond the two of you share and certainly is priceless! You have written a very sweet poem here! Take care!
AWWWWW i loved it it was soo nice i wouldnt call it serious if u could put a second one i would like put like loving err somthing like that but yeah such a strong piece i just read a verry funny poem then went straight away and read this one (the tears starting flowing) i loved it. keep writing liam/patrick <3
The unconditional love of a mother is such a wonderful thing...you will always love your child no matter what. The last verse is absolutely beautiful! As I started reading this I was wondering how old Laura is, but you answered that question and that is one thing I really liked about it. Very good job here Elaine! DJ
And I will never hear those words from my own mother, but I can appreciate the powerful sweetness of this poem. It was beautiful, and very strong in feeling. Maybe my mother will never say those things to me because my eyes are dark brown, almost black sometimes. I always wanted blue eyes...oh well. I feel like saying thank you on behalf of your own Laura, I know I would appreciate something like this Laura-disGrace
This is such a beautiful poem for your daughter, as I'm sure she will love it and it will make her happier than ever. This was a very loving poem that you have here. I see nothing wrong with it at all. The poem is a great gift to your daughter just like you are to her. Hoping for many happy years for you together :)