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Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 99
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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lalala a love poem by yours truely


If



Love, if i'm your light
are you my star
if i'm lost
do you look far
if i ever hurt you
did you forget
if i'm her enemy
is he your threat
if i'm cold
are you warm
if i'm mad
will you wait out the storm
if i'm a fool
are we in love
when you see me everyday
do you thank the stars above
If i'm your moon
are you my sun
if i ever cheated
are we done
if we come last
have they won
and if they are two
are we one




Submitted on 2005-08-22 19:43:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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