this is very emotional i cut well sometimes when theres nothing else i can do! anytway the flow was aesome! and i hope ur parents can help u soon before its to late! well f not im still here! ~akaila evonne~
wow! thsi was awesum! i agree the flow was excillent. I think it does hurt when you cut and your parents cant see it, and they dont realize what your doing and dont bother to help. thsi is sad too. i liked it alot. it was the parfect length and didnt take linf to read. this has to become a favorite ot i may get to depressed myself.lol! hope things get better.
the flow and the rhyming were so on point. like i was rapping this as i read it. i don't approve of cutting and i'm not a big fan of it but this poem is really good. i thought that it would be a poem about something else from the title. i'm glad i read it though.
i really liked it.. i think the length was good it was straight to the point and the flow and rythm was awesome and it fit on so well.. keep safe k? stay alive so you can keep writing stuff for me to read...
its good, it sounds like you really need to comfront your parents about whats wrong, im really sorry that your parents dont notice im lucky mine did or my friends did and my friends told my parents, if this is true about you and your parents you really should get help.