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    dots Submission Name: White Wavedots
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    Author: Dipsomniac
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 59/70/18
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Look of the meaning of "white wave" in celtic language and it may help you understand what its about.


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    dotsWhite Wavedots
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    Climbing slowly into the sky
    Wall of water in my eye
    Bringing all the world to ease

    White wave rising
    Fear in minds disguising
    Grasping to a ball and chain

    Eyeing faults and pointing cracks
    To each his own, eachother's backs
    Carry the weight of who you love

    Golden shower, black as night
    Walking, running, taking flight
    Seeking out the middle ground

    And miles and miles away
    White wave rises to another day
    And reaches for the sun

    On maroon clouds the prince lies
    Stealing memories in the mind's eyes
    And awaits the coming of the day

    Horizon parts, future waits
    Dividing land is what he hates
    Tomorrow promises a white wave




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