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    dots Submission Name: HaRmLeSs KiSsdots
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    Author: brokensmile
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 241/326/148
    Words: 1157
    Class/Type: Misc/BrokenHeart
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    dotsHaRmLeSs KiSsdots
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    HER: swept in
    with the dirt
    under the door
    did you
    hear me
    break

    HIM: never
    your steps
    hardly
    make a sound
    all i saw
    was
    shadow
    fading
    into
    nothing

    HER: its
    pitiful
    how
    i slice
    through hollow
    stale
    air
    always caught
    in the exhale
    of your smoke
    my addiction
    decaying
    from the inside
    your
    the cigarette
    hanging
    from my lips

    HIM: I exhale
    to get rid of you
    clinging
    to every gasp
    i still shudder
    against a body with an edge
    you spark red
    what was left
    and dulled behind
    but im half sick
    of flesh wounds

    HER: you used to
    Watch
    hungrily
    as i inscribed
    new words
    onto your innocence

    HIM: now im falling
    pitching dangerously
    into a nerve racked horror
    realitys needle
    its far too distant
    to ever bring back
    who i was
    you made me
    into
    this

    HER: used
    to be
    harmless
    with just a heart wrench
    and a hot pink kiss
    someone found a darker
    side
    so pucker up
    i need to be on my way

















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      good imagery man. try a more narrative form next time? i dunno, maybe its just me but narrative poetry can express so much more? nice job though
    | Posted on 2005-08-22 00:00:00 | by Erie | [ Reply to This ]


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