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    dots Submission Name: JUNE 29dots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Have you ever had that day that always sticks out in your mind that life changing world alteing day every year it hits you no matter what you do for me its june 29 i take the day off work sometimes the week i drink myself stupid i was curious if this is just my deluded mind or if other people have that day they cant seem to escape

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    dotsJUNE 29dots

    Like a violent storm or angry sea, my life is always turbulent .
    It lacks a certain brilliance , as death approaches.
    I am surprisingly calm.
    Serene ,yes there is a peace in knowing your time is nearly done
    Now that the planning is over the watch begins.
    3 months short of 9 .
    Ill be home for the fireworks .
    I can look down and watch them like falling stars .

    Submitted on 2005-08-22 23:20:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      huh it was all good until i got up to the 5th paragraph and i just lost it i didnt understand at all i just dont understnad
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by Red Liquid | [ Reply to This ]

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