Description: I can't really describe this. I really don't remember what compelled me to write this, other than my ongoing personal battle with myself and other people's perceptions of me. Whatever. If you decide to read this, please don't post any negative feed back. I'm not in the mood. Thanks as always,
Samantha (Melancholymaid)
Thus Shall I Remain -------------------------------------------
Thus I shall remain,
heaving,
scarring,
tearing down iron gates,
blazing collapsed cities.
i liked it the flow was very nice and so was the imagery. i think you caouldve gone a little farther with it but i know if i had wirrten it i would be think 'i think i went far enough thank you' so i dont know why i'm telling you that but oh well. i liked the lines
"The harm was already there when I arrived." i dont knwo i juts like the way they sound i guess well good job
Submission Name: Thus Shall I Remain
