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    dots Submission Name: Passionately Powerlessdots
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    Author: Naymless
    ASL Info:    15/F/phx, az
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 142/110/33
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1054
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    Description:
       I'm going to clarify this for you, real quick because it'll make things a lot clearer. Basically its about a person who loves another person. The only problem is that the person that he loves suffers from insominia and that's somewhat it.


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    dotsPassionately Powerlessdots
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    Let me catch your tears,
    As you fall into my arms,
    Like a dream catcher,
    For your bad dreams,
    And as I hold you close,
    The world will stop its chaos,

    Donít worry about me,
    My tears will dry up soon enough,
    Donít worry about me,
    They donít sting my open wounds too much,

    Will you stop crying?
    Just for me,
    Iíll rip off this bloody band aid,
    Just for you to see me bleed,
    So that I can show you,
    How human I truly am,

    Donít worry Iíll protect you,
    As I close my door from the outside world,
    And I lock it like a safe,
    Then warn the ground with every step you take,
    So that you will fall only in your dreams,

    These dreams are only as confusing as your inner mind,
    So donít concern yourself,
    With the inner workings of your closed eyes,
    This isnít rocket science,
    Just the science of the con,

    So as they days grow long,
    You wonít sleep at all,
    But if it the uncaring night youíre afraid of,
    Iím sorry,
    It canít be prolonged,

    I can beg the sun to stay up,
    But it will only laugh,
    I can beg the moon to hide,
    Or trade it my wildest dreams,
    But it will only pass,

    The night can be cold,
    But without a blanket,
    Woven in my honest sleep,
    Sown in my curious dreams,
    And though this blanket does not exist,
    Itís the only think to keep you warm,

    Thereís only so much I can do for you,
    There is only so much that I am,
    Iím a person,
    Just as much as you,
    And that doesnít help me in the least,

    I could kill those who worry you,
    But then I shall not morn,
    Because I know them,
    And they want dead as much as you,
    They would show my head to their king,
    And set it up on the palace that holds our lost dreams,

    But...
    Iíll try this only for you my love,
    Because for you,
    In my heart,
    You can never leave.




    Submitted on 2005-08-23 17:46:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Of course this was ment for a far more better man, but I hope you got what you wanted? Sleepless night suck and I have been trrough lots of them!
    Very well writen and I hope you keep up the great work?
    Kelley
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this alot..its sad but also very sweet.. u can almost feel the pain as if its u hoo is tryn to help that person.. goodjob n i hope to hear from you in the future <33ash
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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