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    dots Submission Name: Jesus Freaks & Dragonsdots
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    Author: XxMusikJunkiexX
    ASL Info:    18/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 109/134/39
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 990
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1250



    Description:
       inspired by two of the most influential people in my life.


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    dotsJesus Freaks & Dragonsdots
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    v:
    on top of the world and alone in the darkness
    you climbed up here just to see the stars
    that fall from the sky and burn through the blackness
    and bring promises from a God that always seemed to far

    prec:
    here's your chance kid, don't let it slip (x2)

    c:
    turn up the volume, there's to much noise in your head
    live for today and then do it again
    under the gun, play hard, stay strong
    time waits for no one so hold on, move on

    v:
    You canít let it go, you donít want to remember
    You set your soul on fire just to feel alive
    And these flames, theyíll teach you how to surrender
    And rise like a phoenix in the dragons eyes

    c:
    turn up the volume, there's to much noise in our heads
    live for today and then do it again
    under the gun, play hard, stay strong
    time waits for no one so hold on, move on

    verse/bridge
    echoing silence brings you back home
    but the truth will set you free
    echoing silence brings you back home
    well here's your chance kid, don't miss your chance

    ending chorus(es)




    Submitted on 2005-08-23 22:00:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this one of my favs id have to say it flowed so well the point came across but didnt blind me it just felt good thank you for writing it
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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