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    dots Submission Name: EVERY BED IN EVERY HOUSEdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    25/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 225/230/121
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       this is just about those everyday things everynight things i guess how sex becomes kinda ritual and when it doesnt work out when youare tired or just not into it how it doesnt seem to matter as much hmmm anyway what do yah think


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    dotsEVERY BED IN EVERY HOUSEdots
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    Dab of perfume on my thighs
    I let your breath settle on my forehead for a minute or two
    It never takes long to awaken.
    You moan in your sleep
    My hands moves like silk over you I move my head to your belly
    Anticipating the taste
    You turn towards the red numbers
    Its 2:00
    I go back to the floor and light the days last cigarette.




    Submitted on 2005-08-23 22:02:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I absolutely love the last three lines of this piece. I'm not sure why, but it just evoked such emotion from the sheer simplicity. It's odd how that works sometimes. Wonderful poem.
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by XxMusikJunkiexX | [ Reply to This ]



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