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    dots Submission Name: My Everythingdots
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    Author: miss__smiles
    ASL Info:    16/f/Soo, Ont
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 117/110/20
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 834
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    Description:
       Another piece written for my loving boyfriend Dave.


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    dotsMy Everythingdots
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    I get my joy from one thing only
    Your smile, and the way you hold me.

    I get my strength to carry on
    When you tell me that I'm strong.

    When you whisper everything's fine
    I believe you would never lie.

    You tell me how much you care
    My heart is open, my chest is bare.

    I can't imagine life without you
    I wouldn't even know what to do.

    I don't want to think about an end
    I have an entire life to spend.

    Without you there is nothing
    You are my everything.




    Submitted on 2005-08-24 15:49:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Awww..girl... you just totally made me want my boyfriend right now. This was great...beautiful..straight from the heart. Good to be in love huh? I loved your line about him telling you getting you're strength...from him telling you you're strong. That hit somewhere with me. When my boyfriend left for Iraq..he told me he I could do it..he told me I was strong...and that I'd be okay without him...and I was. But I got that strength from him. This was just awesome. Great write.! ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
      ... This is a love poem that describes the feelings from you to your sweetheart I am guessing... I am a sucker for this kinds of poems so here we go... Nice rhything throughout the poem have to give you that one... now onto the easy fun part... Your poem reminds me of how I have felt before when I was in love with like my ex's you know... I felt like we would last since everything looked so nice and serene... Still wish I was with some of them I tell you really wish I was with some of them... Young love is so innocent and pure and sweet... Hope it lasts long and you are happy

    Jose J. Ortiz aka Josyman
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]
      sigh, Young Love...is there anything else like it? I think not. He is your joy, your strength and your future. How grand is that??? I think you are in love, my dear. He sounds wonderful, and you sound like you have found your soulmate. Best of luck to you both, and may you find years and years of happy bliss! luv cher
    | Posted on 2005-08-24 00:00:00 | by Inducted_Kitty | [ Reply to This ]


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