cool. i kno its weird but i always like something that mentions suicide, even if its not entirely about it. i had a little trouble reading this, because it was so fragmented. still good though. keep it all up.
i loved the lines Colliding like Chemical Lips that is just awsome this was so perfect to me flow was amazing thought was totally there and the emotion was not smoothered by crap it didnt need you kept it simple but full of thought very very nice im addin it to my favs