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    dots Submission Name: KNOWINGdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 646
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       this kinda comes out with it i tend to be a lil more eluding so this is new for me


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    dotsKNOWINGdots
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    I waited once in the dark ,just beyond the streetlight.
    Instinct, I knew you’d be there.
    I watched the light come on briefly in receiving.
    Then darkness, and I new I was ruined.
    My hands reached out for the metal.
    It seemed they did it on there own .
    The scent of burning leaves still evident in the ashtray .
    The blade buries itself deep in my thigh .
    I feel nothing though .
    I million days go bye
    Your head lights blind me.
    Your voice seems barreled alone at first then joined by many.
    My head falls down and I can see the red seeping into your shirt .
    I love that color …navy blue.
    I got it for you last Christmas.




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      whoah. i'm not sure what this is...but i see a girl outside in the dark who is in love with a boy and wants him to see her pain. very beautiful. good work, but try to rewrite it and make it more easy to understand. awesome.
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]
      whoah. i'm not sure what this is...but i see a girl outside in the dark who is in love with a boy and wants him to see her pain. very beautiful. good work, but try to rewrite it and make it more easy to understand. awesome.
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]


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