Description: t his stems from a painting i did once i kid you not when i say i painted it n the dark and came out just right to me anyway it still hangs in a hallway in my home hehehhe
NIGHT ARTIST -------------------------------------------
Tonight you are my shelter.
You are every rhythm ,ever song.
It can last forever or just an hour.
Doesn’t matter not to me, not tonight .
I will let you cover me, hide me in your light.
I only wished you’d let me finish .
The evenings painting.
I wish you hadn’t turned the light on .
Everything is more beautiful in the dark.
So ok you found me here
Seems pathetic I am sure.
Think whatever you like tonight.
In your arms the anger leaves for a moment .
I am someone’s something.
There is peace in that .
As Kate said the punctuation was interesting, a different interesting. I like it though! Some of our best stuff is while were sitting there in the dark or at bed at night and get up and just start drawing in the dark. Theres something mysterious about the dark that makes things so much more interesting.The only thing that I would change or that I question is the second line... is it suppose to be like that? Or it suppose to be "every song"? or "ever sung"? Just wondering didn't quite understand that part. All in all it's very good. i really liked it. Some of the best stuff is created in the dark! Love it! ~manda