I really like this because girls especially dwell on how we look in the mirror. You couldn't have said it in any other way, this here should be inspiring to those young girls out there that are getting a bad image from all the celebrities. Great job.
And I thought I was the only one who talked about myself like that! lol. This was very good. It was like you gave a honest opinion of what you think you see yourself like in a mirror. I wasn't expecting you tear down the mirror, after your description, I thought you would say something like it was okay to not be what you wanted to be, and you could or would accept what you consider to be flaws. That to me would of brought the whole poem a better closure. To still be disgusted by the end of the poem, you are still not comfortable in your own skin. Everything esle was fantasic. The flow and self decription of the body spoken of was very good. Nice work. Maggie
I like this poem- and ode to self love. I wouldn't say that I like to look at myself in the mirror but I definitely appreciate who I am. I am not defined by my physical characteristics or material objects, that's why I write, to show the world what's important about me! Good job, your honesty is moving! Melissa
i liked how it was put together and how true it is for alot of people i liked your word use and i compleatly agree with you i don't think girls or guys should dwell on what they look like compleatly we should be happy for who we are...i guess anyway good job