The Jinn standing behind me
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The Jinn standing behind me
you stand behind me friend,foe,or passerby you're huge and creeping up the wall ten times as big ten times as tall are you evil? are you good? or are you just standing there? I can't see you I can't hear you so im wondering... WHY? Is that ur true form? or is it just an image an image ment to decieve upon the wall Do you stand for truth? or do you mean my family harm? a million questions left unansered in my head I guess i'lll just have to wait....... wait until im about to be dead when the angel comes to take my soul my eyes will fully open and i shall truely be counted amoungst the dead..... |
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| Sounds like you might be a little scared of things in life? I like this poem and the way it flows. Keep it up and stop fearing life(smile) Kelley Frost | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | U kind of skip from place to place but over all It was really good I mean I like the depth and all. | | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ] | Good poem. Flows very well. I'm going to give you a bit of a spell check though. | ur -> your unansered -> unanswered im -> I'm truely -> truly amoungst -> amongst | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by little_theif | [ Reply to This ] | |
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