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    dots Submission Name: The Jinn standing behind medots
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    Author: darkness
    ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524/218/40
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 273
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 872



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    dotsThe Jinn standing behind medots
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    you stand behind me
    friend,foe,or passerby

    you're huge and creeping up the wall
    ten times as big
    ten times as tall

    are you evil?
    are you good?
    or are you just standing there?

    I can't see you
    I can't hear you
    so im wondering...

    WHY?

    Is that ur true form?
    or is it just an image
    an image ment to decieve upon the wall

    Do you stand for truth?
    or do you mean my family harm?

    a million questions left unansered in my head

    I guess i'lll just have to wait.......

    wait
    until im about to be dead
    when the angel comes
    to take my soul

    my eyes will fully open
    and i shall truely be counted amoungst the dead.....




    Submitted on 2005-08-25 15:01:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sounds like you might be a little scared of things in life? I like this poem and the way it flows. Keep it up and stop fearing life(smile)
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      U kind of skip from place to place but over all It was really good I mean I like the depth and all.
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Good poem. Flows very well. I'm going to give you a bit of a spell check though.

    ur -> your
    unansered -> unanswered
    im -> I'm
    truely -> truly
    amoungst -> amongst
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by little_theif | [ Reply to This ]



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